Finish It# 31 – Few quivering moments


The earth was trembling. Not sure what to do she grabbed her little girl, hoping her son and husband were safe. Within no time, the worried mother of two rushed toward the patio to see his son. The last time she saw him playing in the garden area. Now, He was found nowhere!

The nerve wrecking situation became intense when she got no replies of her husband who was winding up his work before few minutes in the basement. The shaking earth frightened the little girl so badly that she closed her teary eyes and hugged her mother tightly. The courageous lady approached the basement for safe reasons but was disappointed to see no signs of her husband Harry and 7-year old son Paul anywhere in the house. She kept on screaming “Dear Paul, Are you listening to your mother? I am right here”. But there was pin-dropped silence which disheartens the mother’s hope.

As soon as the vibration settled down, she went upstairs and again, searched for the two dear men of her life. However, little Sara was hanged up at her back.

Suddenly, Sara stopped her mother and pointed, “Mama look!there is Dad and Paul”

Harry and Paul helped the old-aged couple from the trembling earth and shifted them to a safer place. Paul was little scared but, was contended to find his mother and little sister in good. Harry was also in a rejuvenating mood to see his dear women in safe.

This deadly hustle of few minutes caught everyone in contact with the fluster of nature. Not sure what to do she grabbed her little girl and asked a prayer with her husband and son in a low voice.

Hey friends, I have picked up another fiction writing challenge named as “Finish It” and I find it really interesting.

Finish It! story challenge by Author S B Mazing. Thank you.

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